So I need help...this is one of my first works for publication and I was wondering what you thought of it?

Well Sunshine, the poem seems alittle eary or too dark! Also, it's confusing towards the middle to the end! I'm, not sure what your point is, in the poem! I'm sorry, for the critsism, but no one had answered and I thought I'd give it a try! But, the good news is, I'm not a poet, anyways! I'm an accountant who reads alittle poetry sometimes and who knows maybe I'm totally, wrong, here! Good Luck, in your other answers!!